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these are some simple ways to become a mediocre or even amazing basketball player. one way is dribbling, dribbling is an important concept in basketball there are alot of rules in the sport all you have to do is memorize them and youll know what to do and what not to do. and the other way to be advanced in basketball is learn fundamentals in basket ball like lay ups and shooting free throws and shooting around the court those are the basics in baketball. just keep practing those fundamentals and you do them right you will succeed and be advancd in the basketall activity.

Lewis, Good job working on this informative paragraph. Did you use the link that I sent for most of this? I think you can be a good writer if you keep working on this. You could tell the reader that there are a few things that would make them a better basketball player, and then give them simple ways to do that. You basically did that here, but a proofread might clean it up a little. You are doing a good job. Keep writing. You will want to complete the the descriptive paragraph (assignment 2) as well.

my speaker tht i uwant to motivate me is this man named mr. ron he works at the boys n girls club and he can motivate people very well. he helps me understand what i need to do to stay in the right path and not make the wrong thing. he does this to alot of children and once he tells them what they need to do they do it. mr.ron is one intellegent man who has been through alot he knows what happen when you dont make it and he i want him to motivate me to stay in the right path. mr.ron knows what its like when growing p with out an successful life and i can tell it is not pretty i dont want to be a nobody i want to go to the nba and i want him to motivate me to stay in the right path.

Assignment 4: the bulls are verry agerssive and explosive there mian man is derick rose he is very quick and and talented he takes there team to victory and success. They have very good players lyke carlos boozer there power forward, there shooting guard kyle korver and other good people. they have the confedence that they are going to win and i feel that they are goin to win because they know how to use there team and they take good shot selections. derick rose will help there team into victory and he will be known as the mvp.

Why good shooters will help them win the reason why good shooters will help them win because there goal is to score with out any incorect mistakes. Why confidence will help them win tis is the reason why confidence will help them win they have won alot of games like its nothing and there whole team has confidence that they can beat the team on the play offs.

why drose will help them win. he is amasing and explosive he is the leader of his team he is the point guard and he tells them what to do on the court to help them win he is smart and responsiple with the ball he knows what he has to do to lead his team to victory. this is why d rose will hlp them win

conclusion. those are the reason why the bulls should win the play offs and how they can do it which is with confidence good shooters, leaders, responsibility, and a team those are the main thins you need to have to win and they have that.

Lewis, Good job working hard on this. You did a good job at supporting your thesis statement in your paragraphs. Your writing is clear and to the point. Before I grade it, I want you to take a look at it and make sure there are no mistakes that you want to correct. This is always important. Self-editing helps you make sure that your paper says what you want it to say. Good work. Keep it up.

This is it. THE CHAMPIONSHIP FOR THE BEST BASKETBALL TEAM IN THE LEAGE. IN THE BEGENING WE STARTED SLOW WENT THOUGH THE PLAYS WE WERE SCORING AND THEY WERE TO. ARE TEAM IS SMALL WE ONLY HAVE ONE BIG MAN, AND HIS NAME IS MATHEW HE GETS TIRED SO FAST AFTER ONE 10 MIN QUARTER HE WANTS TO SIT DOWN FOR A QUARTER SO WE HAVE LITTLE PEOPLE DOWN LOW AND THEY WOULD JUST SCORE IN THE PAINT. WE WERE QUICKER THAN THEM THE WERE SLOW BUT THEY WERE BIG. IT WAS THE FORTH Q AND THE SCORE WAS 56 TO 60 THEY WERE WINNING BECAUSE FOUL SHOTS. THERE WERE 3 MIN LEFT WE SCORED 58 60 THEY WERE UP 2 MIN LEFT THEY GOT THE BALL THEY CALLED TIME OUT THE CROWED AT THE EDGE OF TERE SEATS SCREAMING WE SHALL WIN WE SHALL WIN. THE COACH JOHN TOLD US TO DO HELP DEFENCE PRESSURE THE BALL AND DO NOT FOUL OR FORSE TURN OVERS. SO WE GOT OUT THERE AND WE TOOK THE BALL OFF OF THEM TWO ONE ONE I WAS ON THE OTHER SIDE HE THREW A ALLEY OOP AND I JUMPED UP AND LAYED IT IN.60 60 THE CROWED WENT WILD AND PEOPLE WAS JUMPING AND SCREAMING I COILDENT HERE MYSELF TALK. THEY CALLED TIME OUT 2.1 SECONDS LEFT WE TALKED IT OVER AND TOLD US TO FOUL SO THEY PASSED THE BALL IN AND FOULED AMEEDIETLY 1.8 SECONDS LEFT THEY MADE BOTH OF THEM WE CALLED TIME OUT AND GOT THE BALL OVER HALF COURT AND TOM PASSED IT TO ME I SHOT, DID I MAKE IT!? tTHE BALL BOUNCED AROUND TYHE RIM AND FANALLY.......

IT WASNT EASY GETTING TO THE CHAMPIONSHIP. FIRST WE NEEDED TO HAVE A TEAM ARE TEAM IS VERY QUICK AND EXPLOSIVE WE HAVE A POINT GAURD HIS NAME IS CORY HE IS SHORT AND HE HAS A FADE, HE IS VERY QUICK AND HAS AN EYE FOR PEOPLE HE IS THE LEADER ON OUR TEAM HE IS A BOSSY AND DETERMEND PERSON AND WHEN IT COMES TO GAMES HE IS MOST DEFFANTLY DETERMEND TO WIN BY AT LAST 10 OR MORE IF NOT HE WOULD BE DISSAPOINTED IN HIS SELF HE SURE DOES NOT PLAY. AND AT ARE SHOOTING GUARD ME I AM VERY QUICK AND HAVE AN EYE FOR THE HOOP DO NOT LEAVE ME WIDE OPEN OR GIVE ME ENOUGH SPACE BECAUSE I WILL SHOOT THE BALL IN YOUR FACE YOU HAVE TO PLAY CLOSE DEFANCE ON ME IF NOT THAN JUMPERS ALL DAY. AND ARE SMALL FORWARD THOMAS HE IS VERY EXPLOSIVE WHEN IT COMES TO DRIVING TO THE HOOP HE HAS ALOT OF HANG TIME AND HE DOESENT HAVE ALOT OF HANDLES BUT WHEN HE GOES TO THE RACK HE WILL DRAW A FOUL OR SCORE AND HE IS LEFT HANDED. HE IS LIGHT SKIN DARK HAIR AND WITH BIG FEET. AND ARE POWER FORWARD RONALD HE IS ABOUT 6'1 AND HE HAS BUNNYS HE WOULD JUMP OVER YOUR HEAD HE IS LIGHT SKIN WITH A BUZZ CUT AND A LITTTLE PEACH FUZZ ON HIS FACE. HE WILL SHOW YOU HOW ITS DONE DOWN LOW AND THEM REBOUNDS HE GETS ABOUT 15 A GAME HE IS INCREDIBLE. AND ARE CENTER HAHAHAH HE IS SO LAZY HE WOULD DO ABOUT ABOUT 1 AND A HALF OF THE QUARTERS HE WILL WALK DOWN THE COURT AFTER GETTING A REBOUND OR SCORE AND HE IS A CRY BABY HE IS SO SOFT AND HE ARGUES AND THINKS HE IS TOUGH AND HE IS BIG SO HE THINKS HE RUS THE TEAM

WE PRACTICE THREE TIMES A WEK AND SOMETIMES ON SATURDAYS WE HAVE OPEN GYM AND WE CAN JUST HANG AROUND AND PLAY BASKETBALL. ARE COACH IS VERY MEAN SOMETIMES WE WE DONT FOLLOW THE DIRECTIONS AND SIT ON THE BALL OR WALK IN PRACTICE OR SIT DOWN. AND ONE THING HE HATES IS WHEN TEAMATES DONT COME TO PRACTICE AND THE DONT GIVE THEM A HEADS UP HE HATES THAT HE WOULD MAKE YOU DO 50 SIT UPS AND 10 RUNNING LAPS. HE WOULD PUNISH US FOR OUR ACTIONS. ONCE YOU SCREW UP HE WOULD MAKE US DO IT OVER UNTIL YOU DO IT RIGHT. WE WENT HARD EVERY GAME AND TRYED ARE BEST UNTILL THE END AND EVERYTIME WE WIN WE GO OUT FOR PIZZA OR SOMETHING DFFERENT. BUT WHEN WE DO NOT WIN THAT TELLS ARE COACH WE NEED TO PRACTICE MORE AND FOCUS ON WHAT WE NEED TO DO. THE FIRST TIME I STARTED THE LEAGH I THOUGHT I WASNT GOING TO LIKIE IT BECAUSE ONE THING I HATE IS BALL HOGGERS AND IF THERE IS ONE BALL HOGGER I WOULD PROBABLY QUIT OR NOT PASS IT TO THAT PERSON. BUT THERE IS NOT ANY BAll HOGGERS AT ALL WE KNOW HOW TO USE ARE TEAM. ARE RECORD IS 14 AND 3 WE HAVE DONE VERY WELL BUT NOW WE HAVE ONE THE PLAYOFFS WE KNOW WERE GOING TO WIN THE CHAMPIONSHIP AND I WAS GOING TO GET MVP. I LOVE WHEN IT IS CLOSE GAMES BECAUSE I AM THE ONE THAT GOT TO WIN FOR US WITH A BUZZER BEATER SHOT. WE PAS THE BAL IN AND I AM AT THE THREE POINT LINE 3.2.1 EEEEEERRRRRRTTTTTTT AND ALL YOU HEAR IS COU AND WE WIN IT AND THEY PUT ME IN THE AIR AND I GET ALOT OF RESPECT AND I ALSO KNOWN.

THE CHAMPION SHIP IS IN 2 DAYS AND WE NEED TO PRACTICE ALOT SO WE NEED TO GATHER THE TEAM AND PRACTICE ON SHOOTING DRIBBLING AND BIENG RESPONSIBLE WITH THE BALL BECAUSE IF NOT SOMEONE WOULD TAKE YOUR COOKIES WITH NO PROBLEM. WE NEED TO WORK ON BOXING OUT SHOOTING FREE THROWS AND REBOUNDING. SO WE DID THAT FOR 6 HOURS ON THURSDAY AND ON FRIDAY SIX HOURS AND FINALLY THE CHAMPIONSHIP WE HAD SOME COMPITION ON OUR HANDS SO THAT MEANS WE HAVE TO GO HARD. WE WERE GETING READY IN THE LOCKER ROOM AND TALKING ABOUT LIKE IF WE WIN HE GOT SOME THING FOR US AND IF WE LOSE HE STILL GOT SOMETHING FOR US. SO WE GOT IN A HUDDLE AND WE GOT HIPPED AND WE PRAYED AND SHOOK THE OTHER TEAMS HANDS. AND THEN THE REFEREE WISSTLES AND WE ARE READY FOR THE TIP OF HE THREW IT UP AND THEY GOT THE BALL AND WE FOUGHT THE FIRST QUARTER THE SCORE 23 TO 20 US. THE SECOND QUARTER WE LOST THE LEAD FOR A WHILE THE SCORE 35 TO 30. THE END OF THE SECOND INTO THE THIRD QUARTER WE TOOK THE LEAD 55 TO 52 US. FINALLY THE FOURTH QUARTER. IT WAS THERE BALL WE FOUGHT HARD WITH 35 SECONDS LEFT THE SCORE 66 TO 64 IT WAS ARE BAL WE GAVE TO ARE CENTER HE MISSED AND WE LOST THE BALL IT WAS A SHOT CLOCK VIOLATION ARE BALL 66 64 THEM. WE IN BOUND THE BALL I BRING IT DOWN COURT ARD I CALLED FOR A ISOLATION 3 SECONDS LEFT 3.2.1 I SHOT IT BOUNCE AROUND THE RIM AND FINALLY WENT IN THE CROWED WENT WILED AR THE GRAFFEETIE CAME DOWN ON ARE HEADS AS I WAS HELD UP IN THE AIR AND THE CROWED WAS SCREAMING LEWIS. LEWIS, IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL SO WE GOT ARE AWAREDS AND WE TOOK PICTURES AND HE HAD A VERY GREAT TIME. SO WE WENT OUT FOR PIZZA WITH OUR TEAM AND I WAS GRUBBIN. AS WE WENT BACK TO THE GYM WE PRAYED AND EVERYBODY WAS SAD BECAUSE WE PROBABLY WONT SEE THEM AGAIN. SO HUG EVERY PLAYER AND SAID I HOPE I SEE YOU AGAIN ANG I GOT PICKED UP BY MY MOTHER AND WENT HOME WITH MY HEAD UP.

Lewis, Great job here. I've noticed your hard work here and that will help you. Keep it up!

Good job Lewis. I like how you got my attention in the first paragraph. I excited to see if the shot went in. Also, you

a good job here describing your teammates. I guess you guys came together as a team during the season to play well in the championship. Keep telling the story about what led you to that championship game

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