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=Assignment15: When i grow up i want to go to college then I want to play basketball if I make it to the nba then I would be on miami heat's team because there a good team and If i suceed then I want to be just like wade and lebron. I love basketball and i will never quit and I will go hard in basketball. I love miami heat and there a great team I will be there best player If i played for miami heat and I will be very happy to play good for the team miami is the best and I hope they win tuesday and the other game they need to find a way to watch Nowitzki and they have to focus very hard to suceed and acheive. I hope that miami heat will do okay and win some people aint miami fans but am the most important for the team I trust them and I hope they can get the score much longer the score on sunday was 88 to 86 Miami. MIAMI HEAT beat the Mavs and dont give up I believe in you guys make the score longer.= =Assignment14: Wikinsburg Middle School:Follow the **diary of a wimpy kid** format and write a journal about a few days of your Wilkinsburg Middle School Experience. You should talk about things that happened in school and YOUR THOUGHTS about them. Please, do not share things that would be inappropriate for a class assignment. Of course, you could try to do this on the WIKI or use regular lined paper. = =The things that happen in school is that I sometimes be thinking am failing and I be feeling so different like I know that I can do it am not going to fail and not give up. If other students can make it then am going to make it am going to pass all the way to 12th grade I promise a special friend and am not going to fail am very smart and good at math and reading and all my subjects and I believe that am going to do good in school and am not going to quit I be feeling like it but I really dont but am going all the way and I may go to college and Graduate from there and then am going to miss every one then I will visit. When I was in Kelly elementary school I used to have lots of friends I still do but am going to miss my friends and am going to still have lots fun in my life. This school is alsome and I know am not going to fail at all I did before but now am focus and on point. The best part am going to miss is the cheese fries because what if I didnt go to this school no more the teacher I would miss if it was my last year here it would be Mr Boll because he is funny and he jumps around to much he is the best and will always be the best the second best teacher is Ms Conrad she is the best because she helps me when I need it and when I got that Mc donalds card I was happy and could'nt wait to use it and the good thing about this school is that the teacher's help you. The bad thing is that they dont have A.C thats what this school really needs. I would be happy to have Air Condition we would not be hot and we will be cool and refresh. I would be very happy if I was student of the month. I was at Kelly School and they gave me a shirt and a bag. That was alsome there are so many memory's that i won't forget. I love Wilkinsburg Middle School and I hope I have fun while am here.= = = =Assignment13: Progress is good because when your hurt you will get medical attention and they will treat you the best way they can. Its easier in life because I get to play the game spend the night over my cousins house and playing all the games like my psp playstation2 and xbox360 its the best life ever. I am a special kid I get to do lots of things like play outside. I dont really get on punishment, I get lots of clothes and shoes and stuff I would have lots of fun.= =﻿Progress is bad because some times I cant play the game and sometimes people be getting on my nerves and I be very mad If I didnt pass seventh grade then I would be sad and mad and angry then I would have to do everything all over again having bad luck is bad and I dont have it.= = = = = =Assignment12: Lebron james and dwayne wade are hard they crushed the bulls there to hard the bulls did a good job but its time for them to get out the playoffs to but the miami heat are outstanding I didnt know I was sleep then I heard that the bulls lost bye bulls go heat. The heat did a great job at home and away their a good team miami lets go miami lets go. Going With you Guys All the Way. MIAMI HEAT!=

=Assignment11: My smart house going to be like a pop machine that when you push the button it selects a pop for you. The other thing about it is that the house is very special because you can change the wall color and have a water bed and a tv that turns on when you sit down and it is very alsome. I really want that house like that's going to be the best ever.= = = =Assignment10: Lil Wayne is a good singer he is very good and is a good man he made this song called lilwayne john ft rick ross its hard. lilwayne also is kind of crazy he had a gun I his pocket He is weird I think he should not have did that. lilwayne shot himself In the head I he could have died. I lilwayne dont do that in yall life I think lilwayne cool he could have became dum and no one would like him at all. They would not like him in the beginning. That is so weird kids all I no is dont do stupid crazy things in life I did some crazy things got in trouble and i wasnt allow out at all. The related people he singed with was chris brown, beyonce and some others. He is a good singer he should have never shot himself in the head he could have been dum which he is dumb any way he is stupid he is a good singer he makes the best songs a little bit they are the best ever and lilwayne is a good artist he says bad words but I think he alright but very stupid he has lots of friends makes lots of songs. I think lilwayne is a good rapper and is very creative and he has tattoos and thats just to much and tattos he dont need that many tattos he looks ugly with them and when wears glasses and he is very retarded but I think lilwayne is the best artist ever.=

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=Assignment9: Lebron Raymone James was born in December 30th 1984 an he is a American Professional Basketball player he plays for Miami Heat His Nick Name is King James the reason why they call him king james is because he is the king of all kings and he was a three time Mr.Basketball of Ohio in Highschool.He was selected a number one pick as a future NBA Superstar with Cleveland 2003 he had the highsest sucess and was the Most Vauble Player in 2008-2009 and 2009-2010. Lebron has been in all-star games since 2005. In 2010 James ended up signing for Miami Heat and He is the best player and he does not give up and if he trys harder he will get he made it to the championship with his team in like 2008 or 09. I really think Lebron does a very good job in basketball and he is a very good job.Assignment8: This story is going to be about my favorite friends and how we play My friends and I are very good friends and when we play we work to together and we fight to the end and we are always fighting when we lose we dont give up we try harder but when they lose they fall to their knees and they cry when we play we dont fight. We have other players to their My friends to they just the decided to join they are Marquis,Brandon G,Douglas,and Brian. Sometimes we verse other people and when I give up I never fall and The other do am like Lebron James shooting threes and never giving up.=

= Assignment 7: The best that happen in my life is that all my friends came over for my 10th birthday.All my friends came over to celebrate with me the best part was that I had a cake that said happy birthday Eddie and some ice cream that was so good. If i was able to bring more people I would bring all my favorite teachers Mr.Boll Ms.Martinez,Mr.Klein and Mr.Wagner snd Ms.Conrad those are my favorite teachers. I would bring to my party. My friends and all my family members to we would all have a good time and every time. I have friends I bring them over to have alots and alots of fun and it would be about all my friends teachers and my family members so they can have a very good job! We played games at the my party the games I had were grand thef auto and call of duty Black Ops.Grand Thef Auto is hard because﻿ you can drive around talk to girls and stuff. Call Of Duty Black ops is hard because you can kill zombies. You can do missions have hard guns and then you can unlock new maps but through Xbox live or the internet. After, We all played for a while we went downstairs to watch T.V. We watch a scary movie and it was saw1 it was hard they were scare so. After the movie ended we went in the Living room and talked for a while and we talked about how we can be friends forever one of them move. Now there not my friend but I will find another one but after we talk we went in the dining room and said Happy Birthday and I cryed and said thank you guys you guys are the best and I will miss you that was because they were moving soon and I will miss them dearly.There my best friends and I believe that im going to help my friends in till I die! Well my friends I still talk to them there one in california and one some where around hear my best friends are so alsome I was crying with tears shaking and I was so upset that day. I was going to cry that whole day they were the best friends. I ever had I wish I can see them again or talk to them right now the way I could talk to them is if i go on facebook then i could talk to them an then I can talk to them for along long time and we will talk about how we miss each other.I wish I can have another party then I can see them again they all moved there no where near me no more but it will be ok I got more friends but I will miss them the most they were going to move to califorinia to see there family and friends and they really didn't want to leave but we said are see you later's. = = Eddie- This is really good. thanks for sharing about your 10th birthday. Could you add a paragraph today that discusses what happened to your friends. You say that you miss them. Did they all move? Do you talk to them at all anymore? What could you do to talk to them? YOu have a good story here. It sounds like a great party. Good job. = = Assignment 6: My name is Terry and i had a great job and it was a doctor and one day i got scratch by a bear and i got three scratches and my ear is bitin on my a bear and i had to go to the hospital and then they sad i was going to be in the hosipital for a year and then i was like what that is to long man please i dont want to stay in here that long. Then one year later he got out and then he had to go home an relax for a while and then he got stiches and they hurted me and i said when i see that bear again im going to kill him then after i got home i went to sleep and then my wife woke me up and said are you okay i said yes i think am going to go to sleep okay she said.Then i went to sleep and i was thinking about the bear in my sleep then i dreamed i killed that bear and i maid that bear suffer to death and i killed the bear and then i woke up and said am going to kill that bear i toll my wife i was going out and then this crazy bear was sitting in the forest and then i went up to it killed it and went home the bear was a bad bear am just glad it wasnt noone in my family am just hurting and am upset that the bear was trying to kill me i wish that bear's never exist in my life they are very dangerous and harmful people dont end up like me being hurt and sad remember dont get near bear's. =

Good description here Eddie. I think this is an interesting story you made up that does a good job at including the thoughts and feelings of the narrator. This will be helpful for you when you write a personal narrative. Remember to take time describing the events of the story clearly. Your writing could also be better if we work to break it up in paragraphs. Paragraphs are groups of sentences. When you talk about something different; move to the next line. = Good work on this assignment Eddie. You can make some time (after school or at lunch) to make up the older assignments. This will help your grade. = = Assignment 5:Hines Ward and Kym Johnson got a 27 out of 30 yesterday night and they are to good at dancing and hines and kym are good competiters and they elieve and i believe to that their going to stay in this dancing with the stars and that hines ward and kym johnson are my favorite they are very good am your fans forget about football hines and dance but when that dancing with the stars is over then you can play football and hines ward should watch some games while hes out of football if they give up the lockout please just let hines play football and he will understand that he will be the best nfl player and the reason why he is the best football player is because he is a excellent catcher and he sometimes slack off but he is good but the reason why he wants to dance is because of the lockout and the reason why kym is a good dancer is because she danced before the others. Hines and Kym keep your head in the game. = = Assignment 4:The best in the basketball leaugue is the miami heat because they have good players and they believe to make it to the playoffs if they can keep believing in theirselves then they can move on farther and to believe you have to believe in your team and to do that you have to try very hard the other reason why their the best because they have two good players they work together to win the games they are Lebron James and Dywayne Wade their to competitive players. They are very good friends and like to work together james is the best because he has a good accurate level and he believes that he can reach the level to the playoffs and their going to work together to beat every team. Dywayne is a good point guard and he likes to make threes so sometimes he doesnt shoot the threes he passes it to LEBRON JAMES the superstar mvp he is the best at all cause. = = Assignment3:Dywayne Wade and Lebron James are the best players because they pass the ball to each other and work together to win games they did a slam dunk in a game wade passed it to Lebron and dunked the ball and the crowd was shocked.Chris bosh is good to he has a three point shooting range and he is good at playing basketball and Chris bosh is a sucessful player and he passes the ball and he has to have good accuratce to win the game and Chris bosh is a good shooter and he believes in himself. = = Assignment2:They are good friends because they work together and they pass the ball to each other and Dywayne and Lebron are good friends because you can tell they talk to each other and they really will do good in games in my opinon i think miami is going to win the playoffs because they have compasion and if they believe in theirselves then they can get farther in the playoffs. = = //Assignment1: Wade is a good point guard because he practice alot and when he practices he gets better and better everytime and when he gets mad he dont play wade has been believing in himself thats how they can become a very good team and another reason why wade is the best is that when he was little he use to play basketball and now he's good he use to be MVP like in 2007 or 2008 one of them. There a good team and as long as they have wade and lebron they will become stronger and better and soon they will never lose remember dont never give up make the crowd rise up.The crowd believes in you in many ways miami they are like your family they love you miami and they trust you. Remember miami dont never ever fall.// = = //this is why think Lebron James, Dywayne Wade,Chris Bosh are good players and they are the greatest in the NBA history by favorite players chris bosh lebron james and dwayne wade.// = = Ok Eddie, you did a pretty good job with this. You worked hard to back up your thesis that the Miami Heat are the best team in basketball. Now, you should go on to the next assignment. Becuase you missed so much class last week, you have some make up work to do. Keep working hard and you will catch up. Good job with this essay. = = =