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in an empty class that haves a many rews of dask with along rectangiler poster in front of the class after a while around 7;30 in the morning 5 to 9 kids walk in talking, laghing ,and playing thay sit in the carner desk while the teacher writes or erase tthing on the baerd while waiting for the bell to ring kids play , talk .sleep and roem in the hallways then finally the bell rings and all the kids run out the room to their 1st class periond then the room is emtpy again

Good job with the description Carletta. I like that you picked the homeroom time when students are arriving to school. This was a really good subject. There is room for more description. You could add some more details about the students or the teacher. You could also talk about the room. It might help by describing something that you can see while you are writing. Good start.

I think that rosa park would be a geat at motivate speaker because she would inspire student to do their best and to be on task. she would also be a great pirson to talk to and help us to stand up for are rights. rosa could help us to have faith in are selfs and to sucseed in life. She could

To make a pizza 1st you get your ingredients 1st you will need pre made or homemade dough, 1 egg ,tomado paste , grated cheese like mozzarella or a different combination of cheese ,then you will need olive oil , and a topping there are many toppings to pick from like pepperonnoi ,chopped onions or mushrooms after you have all your ingredients you put all your ingredient on the dough and then you get a large pan and put olive oil on the pan so your pizza does not stick to the pan then you put in the oven and let it cook for 320 degrees for about 15 to 20 min then take in out and that how you make pizza.

dear: guvernment 4/4/11 Im writeing this letter to ask the guvernment if you can start a holliday that celibrates a day that familys get to gather to celibrate a day off of no work and no school on this day there should be a perade, partys, and fun fairs at the fun fairs and perades and partys people should be congradulated for all there hard work and achivements this holiday should not only congradulated people for there hard work it should also remmeber people that have achived things back then

People need a day to spend with family because some people don't get to spend time with there familys because of there jobs or thay are in different counties or states or maybe some people have a bad relationship with there parent and need time to get along with each other or to have a day were the family can get together to have fun like go to kenny wood or go on a vacation.

People need a day to celebrate achievements like graduations and good things that happen because thay might be to buisy to celebrate like they might have to work or get to a impartent meeting.

People need a day to remember the past because if it was't for some of the things that happened in the past things would be different now so that why we should celebrate the good things or some of the thing that changed history.

I opened my eyes and I relized I couldent feel my fingers I got up and relized my partner sam was baried in at least 2 feet of snow I ran over to get my partner and to keep walking up the mountain when sam said were stranded here I looked at my partner scared to say something then sam said it again were stranded but it was louder then the first I then I turn and told sam to be guiet so anuther avalanch dose't fall then we heard a clinging sound and a helikopter apeired so we ran to the nearest hill and seen that there was a near by military base just 200 miles down hill so we started down hill when I sudently I heard a huge cracking sound then I had a felling that my legs were about to give out then I heard a big crash and I fele I open my eyes to see my partner sceeming are you ok then I jumped up feeling slight disy when another helicopter flow pass then my partner jumped up sceming help then it disappered into the clowds so my partner helped me out of the hole by useing a bungy rope to pole me up it took awow because the ice was slipery but I finaly got out and me and my partner keeped walking down the hill to safty.

Have you ever had a day when you wish you had just stayed in bed well I did. I got up felling relly sick like I my bone were relly week or like thay were going to break and I felt like I just wanted to die .I got up any way though and got ready for school after I got ready I sat at the table to eat a quick breakfest whan I look at the calinder and relized it was sunday. For a few minite I sat there in disbaleif and confused then I got up and and walk up the stairs felling even werser then I did before because the stair just seemed to keep going like an eskilater finaly I made it up the thairs and in to my room and sudently I just fel right on the bed then before I could close my eyes my mom called me and told me to come an I slowly went down the stair neerly faling on the last step then I ask my mom why I had to come down so early she said it was because we going to drop my step dad off at work then take my grama shoping I did't see why we had to get up so early just to do but I had no choice but then my mom asked me why I was dreesed before every body else was so I told her what happened and she looked at me with a weird look after avery body was ready we got in the car and sudently I felt sharp pain in my head when I got in the front seet like I was getting lite headed and like I was going to fall or some thing so I desided to just sat in the back after I we droped my step dad off I told my mom I did't feel well at first she thought I was lieing but for almost the whole day all I did was sleep In the car after we picked up my grama we had to go to walmart so I had to get out the car while my grama was shoping i asked my mom if I could go out side because I felt like I was going to faint olmost like I was riding on a roller coster for a week none stop but she said no because there was no one out there to watch me so for about 3 to 4 hour or more I walked aroud walmart feeling like my head was going to berst so I had no choice but to walk around with my grama until it was time to leave after we left we dropped my gama off. We pick up my step dad and went home I was so glad when I got home the first thing I did was go to my room and fal right asleep and that what happened that day

Carletta- you did a great job with description and storytelling in the beginning of this narrative. I do think you could improve the middle and end of it. Take time to describe the headache and your feelings about staying in the car and walking around walmart for 4 hours. This will help you narrative take shape and help me to understand the conflict that was brewing in your mind. Good job so far.

a influichal person to me would be left eye lopes. left eye was barn on may, 27 , 1971 she did't heve any siblings she was the only child and as she was growing up she was influeinshal to many people all over the warld like for instint in 2003 on a reality show for charity and won 32,000 dollars then later on during the years she helped prodictions studios find new talent and often during her curerer she read fan mail and bloged on a web site she made but was shut down in 2009 and some times deticated song to many that have lost some one in there past including her father she also started a foundation for lost and negleted children even donating her own chothes she also prvoded thing for the needy in 2004 but on april, 25 , 2002 at the age of 30 left eye lopes died in a terrible car crash causing many rietes on the steet but for so many things she have done for many she will always be rememberd

smart house

3 days ago I bought a house on 50th street It looks like a nice house but I din't know whats in it because I brought it off a freind over the summer last year. so I walk to the front door and got the key out I put the key in and it opened. I walked in house and the first thing I seen was the tv the tv was like a huge srceen in the in the wall with 3 big speakers on the left and on the right there was a basket on the wall next to it so looked in the basket and saw a bunch of remote cantrals so I grabed 4 remotes and the 1st one turned on the cilling fan the 2sd

progress is good new tecknolagy new tecknolagy can help shape the future for good things to come but not thing people build are good like at first it could just be a good idea but after it's build it could turn out to be bad for the evirment

Easier some tecknolagy could make

diary of a 7th grader

beep, beep , beep sounds of my alrm going off then I get up aned get ready and then to leave. finnaly Im at school whan I get to homeroom cass and see that no one is in the class so I sit in a chair then the bell rings and every body starm ion the room as if some one or some thing was after them then the teacher tolk attendeds 20 to 30 minites later the bell rings again and first period starts in the hallways sound fill the air many sceeming and chirs and many others. finnaly Wow! good start here Carletta. This was a great introduction because it made me interested in what was going to happen next. Good job. Keep to explain each mor