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= I think that ice t would be the most motavative speaker because he has been through alot and he can tell me everything i need to know about life and beeing a young independent black man. He can also teach me how to handle alot of situations that you willface in life like jobs and how to handle failure or how to take it the wright way and not the wrong way.i Think that what i mean by his been through alot i mean he has witnessed alot and has been through alot and alot of the wilkinsburgh students have been through alot and still are going to be in alot.In conclusion that is why i think ice t is a great motivational speaker = = On friday after school around 2:40 i was walking home with othello then i fell and it was hard to get back up. then a car rode by playing get back up by bow wow then it actually felt much easier to get back up. i was feeling weak in my knees at first but when i got up it felt like i was a new kid = = if your having car trouble like a flat tire here are a couple tricks to changing a flat or if you just want to change your tire. rule number 1 never go under a car with one jack holding up the car. number 2 park the car on a flat surface so it doesent roll. number 3 when your done make sure you lower the vehicle enough to get the jack and keep the brake on. = = ﻿Eugene, good job working hard on your writing. You have completed all three assignments. Generally, I think you could do a better job at adding description, details, and explanation. Your writing is strong and focused. Feel free to add some more description and = = I think that the best basketball player would be kobe bryant because he has six rings and he is a great sportsmen player. = = kobe bryant has six rings because he is a great team player and he also isnt a ball hog. he also has experience which means he can take a fall or he can take a lost. = = he also gets along with his teamates and his coach because he shows respect and he treats them the way he wants to be treated.his teamates will be glad to give kobe the ball because he will give them the ball back. kobe can also help his teamates with geting rebounds,assist,and points. = = kobe bryants talent isn't just to play basketball its just like everyone else on his team play smart and have fun and go for the win. his coach also believes in his decisions and thats what makes kobe such a good and smart player. = = the coach of the lakers has to trust his players decisions. sometimes they go wright and sometimes they go wrong. = =Eugene, You have a good start here. I think you can be a really good writer. Keep working hard. Now, this is a 5 paragraph essay. It seemed like that had you confused in class today, but it won' t be so bad if we expand on what you already have. You will explain the details you gave in the first.=

One paragraph on why 6 rings and experience makes him the best.

One paragraph on why having good sportsmenship and being a good team player makes him the best. You could add here about how he doesn't cry when his team is down.

And, one paragraph describing his relationship with his coach and his decision making and why that makes him the best.

Make sense? this is how we take your one paragraph above and make an essay. With details and explanation. Work hard today and you will be fine. Keep working hard.

I think that the man who was beatin to deathit surely wasnt a accident i think i kno acouple ways to make it so that something like this doesent happen again.
1.put up cameras on the poles and the residents should get security in their homes

2.another thing they can do is try to have a neighborhood watch

3.they should also have a cop car potral the neighborhood evey 30 minutes

4.another one is to talk to each other about looking out their windows for anything suspicious

in conclusion those are the things i think they can do to be safe
== //﻿this is assignment 6. I am joe but my friends call me car because i work in a auto shop. im a black male and i surf when i have free time. i hang with my best friend and his name is bob. one day we were on the beach virginia beach and bob dared me to surf a wave but i didn't kno that it was a tsunami. so i grabed my red board with stripes and// **//i headed out. I seen a big wave coming and i decided that i would surf it so i stood up and then it came. at first i was surfing it but then things got a little shakyand i fell. at first i was underwater and still moving with the wave. i couldnt breath, i was being tossed around and then that's when the wave hit the shore i was bareely breathin i had sand on me. bob ran over to me he tapped my shoulder i couldn't believe i was alive. It has been two month'ssince the accident happened i surf sometimes but i have learned my lesson when i get dared i don't do it.//** ==

Good job with this Eugene. I like the story you told here and you did a god job at sharing some details. I think that you could add a little more of the characters thoughts. WE can talk about this more.

wake up, wake up. ok,ok i'll get up just give me 5 more minutes. i woke up, is it friday i asked my sister she said no goofy it's monday. the only thing that was running through my head was why,why,why monday i hate mondays. it seems to be every monday i loose my pencil, drop my lunch, or i miss the bus. every monday i have bad luck prettymuch. but this monday was diffrent somehow i didnt miss the bus, or get in trouble at all it was like i had an angel on my side, like god was picking up my mistakes before i walked into them.It was like my life has turned around instead of bad luck i had good luck. i was wonderig if next monday was going to be like this monday. as the end of the day came up aroun 2:32 i was starting to get a bad feelin that something was going to happpen while i was walking home. I as soon as it hit 2:33 the bel rung, ding ding ding everyone rushed out the room except for me. i was walking out the room and the teacher stoped me and said why arent you acting like everyone else and i said im scared i have bad luck. He said don't believe that stuff just believe that you will have good luck all the time and you will. Even till this day i believe that.

This is a really good story. However, it is a little shorter than I hoped for this assignment. I think you did a good job of telling a story that you remember and that taught you a lesson. To make the story longer, i think you could describe the day a little more. What else went well in the day? What happened that made you begin to think that something bad was going to happen? Why do you think the teacher's words still stick with you?

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hie im eugene davis and i was asked to join a group of scientist and thet were trying to figure out my old house when i was 4 years old. noone could figure out why i got picked but i think its because my parents seperated. when i first walked in the house the room tempeture hanged to a cool breze bcause i was hot. then the floor opned up and there was a hot tub and a pool in the midle of the floor at first i started to question myself was this the house my parent were talking about giving me if they ever seperated. the scientist were wondering why all the other people who tried to enter the house the door was locked but everything was open to me. a couple of minutes later the scientist were scattering out of the house i said hey one of them said you can have the house.

A couple reasons why i think progress is good is because it can help our transportation ways like for example a paramedic can notify the nurses that there coming in so have all the equipment ready. another reason why progress is good because you can have fun because it also has games that you can play with friends that have moved away. the last reason why i thik progress is good is because you can learn more and if your arguing over whos right you can easily search in the answer. in conclusion that is why i think progress is good.

boyz vs girls boyz are always trying to compete. they always want to be know as the stronger one. But girls care about fashion and hygein some of them are diffrent