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= Assignment: 7th grade Narrative = = Well i came to this school when i got of turner = = i think its a liltle fun here you get what you need to and learn what you = = need to learn.Even if you dont like the teachers they will = = try to help you no matter what you do = = even if you get smart they will send you out but = = when you come back then they will be like (are you ready to learn) = = then you will be lke man homiez are boyz this then what you will get kick = = write back out what for wasting your time and the teacher's time.So you need to be good here on some real stuff like be good cause when you need someone to talk to they will be like write there.Like its very weird but you will get use to it. = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = My side is progress is good. = = = = 1. Progress is good because = = you can communicat with people = = and get to no them befor = = he/she and you meets like = = you can get on facebook,email,and = = even your cell phone thats how you = = can communicat with people. = = = = (its also good) = = = = 2.Talk to someone you = = no are haven't seen = = in a while like you can say (do i no you ) = = and the reasponse will be (yes im your = = aunt your mom's sister) thats how you get = = to no people on the internet.And this helps = = us tay connect to our friends and family. = = = = = = = = 3.You can search for people = = and jobs.Like you can get on the computer = = type up rose were she lives and you will = = have the address right there on the computer. = = Like on jobs do the same thing = = but you can go to any website = = to get what you need to get done for what ever jobs = = your looking for =

Well it was like three years and four months ago .When my family lost a nephew .Donye Tyree Golphin was his name and my brother was hurt he wanted to beat up his babys mom ,but what was that goin to do he was gone i was crying. All i could think about was me bein with him. I said I cant belive this.My little brother was crying four three days. Everyone was crying and mad.Like his mom didnt even cry she was hurt inside but didnt show. My niece Shakyna was there i was hurt we all was.Everyone Wanted to beat the mom up cuz he was in the hosiptal. He was a good little boy he really didnt do anything wrong. He didnt go to school because he was only five.My brother was hurt my whole family was hurt And my brother Eric was crying.He punched two big holes in the wall. It was a crazy day.Everyone was crying like its was just a crazy day. Donyes mom was at the funeral she,was not even crying like my niece was mad cuz she lost her brother i was mad cause i lost my nephew it as ok after a little while later.Well is was like i was up in the morning then my mom got a call we was all happy playing and suff but when my mom answered the phone donyes mom said that e had an asthma attack in his sleep i was done everyone was we all rushed to the hospital and when we got there he was gone i was soo mad i was like you blank-blank baby i was mad i was in tears I was so mad i was crying it was a hard day.My mom said that we have to be up because shakyna was goin to be hurt even more if she saw us.But when christmas came she was happy we all was and now she is here doin what she need to do we are doing good.

I think you do a really good job here at describing how people felt when your nephew died. I think you could spend a little more time talking about what happened to your nephew and how he died. Tell the story. Where were you when you found out? This kind of thing would help the reader understand the story. But you do a great job talking about how everyone was feeling.

My name is Bob and i am 26 yeas old i live with my girlfriend we have 4 kids togather we live in new york city when the kids go to school i make ballons for the older people and then when were done i take the to the beach a let them go.

About that i make like 25,000 dollars a year we dont much with the money just spend it on our kids and the bills and just put the rest in the bank. Then i go and make more ballons like once you get use to it you will love it.

But thats what i do but when it comes down to it the reason why i like doing this is because it makes the people feel good about themselves

Good job here Monae. I like that you include some thoughts from the characters. This will make your writing stronger. To improve your description, you could describe the house you are living in, the kids could get more detail, and you cold talk about your job more. Good start.

Ok Monae- better work here. You still owe me some of the early assignments. Work hard with this. You can be a good writer.

Assignment 5: Well i think that the teacher did not get a chance to tell her side of the what really happen

1.Is because well if she really did it then what would their parants say well my opinon the will be upset.

2.Like if really comes down to it then i will fire her to but the way they did they didnt even give her a chance to tell her side but if that was me i would of side please tell us your side of the story so that we can understand whats goin on and really see whos lying are telling the truth.

3.But what was the reason for her to do that thats the question they should be asking her but what ever they did i bet they said nothing like that nothey did not but thats all i have to about that talk to yall later.

I think Rosa Parks should have a national holiday like Martin Luther King Jr. becuase she inspires us to make better choices, she was very courageous, and she made us what we have become today.

Well Mrs.Rosa Parks she made my life how it is today she made me do alot like when i was reading her book about her story is was very good like i felt like i could relate to her story but when its really comes down to it she was inspiring to me like she was a great person.But when it really comes down to it she made alot of differnce in this world today.

Well she was courageous because she gave up her sit like she was tired of being push around and everyone like really look up to her because when it was like that something in the back in the day so she was couragous do what she did like nobody else was going to do it soo it was her who did she made it happen when everyone else just talked like she did it.

She made us become what we are today cause she did what everyone didnt do she had the couragous to do it and had the respect do to it without no probily.

Conclusion. Man rosa parks she made it throw life it was hard but she did it and that my reason why i think she should have her holiday. And then she died 1913-2005 she was a great person she really should have her own holiday.

Monae, way to work hard on this yeseterday. Generally your paper is ok. Go to bollsclass.wikispaces.com to do some of the work that you are missing for class and add it to this page. You can start with assignment 4, or go back to 1, 2, or 3. You have to make up some of this work to be sucessful in class.

Well first im going to write about my principal Mrs.T Ayers

Like for one reason why i think she would be a good speaker is cause she really love her students

2 she cares like if you get in trouble then you will be in trouble but not as much.

3 She will help you get a job and every thing.

And thats what i think about this